Saturday, July 31, 2010

A Proper Young Thief: Chapter 1: The Little Thiefling

A Proper Young Thief

M.K.Barry

Chapter One: The Little Thiefling

Lissa hugged her basket close to her and took a long, deep smell. The smell of fresh bread, like what her mother used to make when she was little, filled her nose and warmed her despite the cold. As the late fall air chilled her fingers, she had a memory of herself as a small child, running into the house, fingers numb with cold, cheeks tingling, and smelling the bread that her mother was making. She looked up. This was the deadest time of year in her opinion. At least winter had some beauty to it. The trees were bare, and scratched at the sky. The few dead leaves that had not been blown into the river scampered on the ground.

Her mother didn't make bread anymore. She and her mother were servants of Lord Mintas, and Lord Mintas had his own cook, who preferred to buy her bread from the bakery. Lissa told her mother that it was a wasteful practice, and that they should let her make bread if the cook didn't want to. Her mother shrugged, and said that if Lord Mintas had the money to spend on fresh bread every day from the bakery, he could have it. To Lissa, It wasn't the same. You couldn't buy the smell of home.

She heard laughter behind her. She froze up for a moment, and managed to just stop herself from turning around. Holding her baskek over her arm, held before in the most lady like way she could manage, she started walking home, trying to walk fast enough to get there quickly, but slow enough to show that she wasn't rushing, to show that she didn't want to run.

She turned off the market street, and down a lane until she was heading towards Lord Mintas' house. She could see grey smoke coming out of the chimney. Theresa had been preparing a special meal all day for some lord from Rawlins. Lissa was expected to do the serving today, an attempt to impress Lord Mintas' guest. It also meant that she could have a bit of what they were having to eat. A cooked hog, most likely. It was Lord Mintas' favorite.

Something hard hit her in the back. A sound like a knock on wood reverberated though her, and she stumbled, dropping her basket. She swooped down and grabbed the bread before it rolled out onto the dirt. She heard something behind her, and turned just as one of the village boys her age came up behind her, grabbed her hair, and pulled hard, pushing her down to the ground as he did.

“Hello little thiefling.” He said. A small group of boys were behind him, watching and laughing. She recognized him, His name was Ghant. She recognized them all. It was a small town, and everyone knew everyone else, as well as everyone's business.

“Let me go.” Lissa hissed. She scanned the ground. Her basket was tipped on it's side, the bread rolling on the dirt. An apple sat off to her side, a large bruise facing her. She guessed that was what was thrown at her. There were no large rocks around. Nothing she could fight them off with. She could escape, even if she had to run. She reached up, grabbed her hair and tried to pull it out of Ghant's hands. He let go, and she fell to the ground on her hands and knees. Tiny pebbles dug into her hands, the pain of the half-frozen ground hurting more than the cuts. Ghant – she suddenly remembered that it was his mother who once called her mother a slut in the market- reached as though to pull her up from behind, and grabbed her breast.

She swung around, and felt the back of her open hand connect to his head. He stumbled back. Lissa grabbed her basket, collected the bread, and stepped back.

Ghant looked at her, showing his shock that a girl, this girl no less, had just slapped him. When he realized that his friends were still behind him, he started snickering.

“If it bothers you so much, I'll pay you double.” He laughed, “A cute little thing like you, You could do worse.”

“If you want a whore, go to the bar and gape at the servers there. Unless they've thrown you out again for rubbing yourself.”

She saw him blush slightly, but since he had his back to his friends, they couldn't see. He stood up straight and snorted at her, “Well, you're either a whore or a thief. Which is it?”

“Neither.”

“With a thief for a father, I think not. If you're not a whore, then you must be a thief.” He eyed her basket, “I bet you even stole that food.”

“I did not!” She snapped, “It's food for Lord Mintas' guest.”

“I bet she stole it.” One of his friends said.

“Then we better take it back and find out who owns it.” Ghant said.

“And her shoes,” One of his friends said

His other friend, a skinny boy who had quickly paled once the days got cold, leered at her. “And that pretty little dress!”
Lissa turned to run the rest of the way to the house, but her knees hurt from falling, and they were faster. One of Jason's friends caught her by the arm, swung her around and held her arms behind her and pushed her to the ground. She fell down, face first, and felt the other boy sit on her. She felt someone pulling at her shoes.

“Oi!”
Jason swore, and they all started running. Someone stepped on the small of her back and someone else kicked her in the shoulder.

“They're at it again?”

Lissa looked up at Luc. Lord Mintas' son. He was Lissa's age, and half the reason that Lissa and her mother lived with Lord Mintas now. The year after Lissa's father had been taken away, Lord Mintas' wife had died in childbirth. She, and the baby had died and several months later, Lissa's mother bought Lissa to Lord Mintas' house to work. An extra set of hands to lighten the burden of mourning.

“They're always at it, M'lord.” She said. She rose to her knees and picked the bread up from the ground. The crust was broken, and dirt and grass clung to the exposed white flesh. She would have to run home, take some of the coins she saved up from making dolls as presents for some of the younger, noble children, and get more.

Luc took the bread out of her hands. “One of the boys... He was the Baker's son, wasn't he?”

“I.. I wouldn't know.” Lissa said. Most of the time, it was better to ignore them. To stand up and walk away like it had never happened. There was no point in asking for help. She was the daughter of a thief, and they were the children of merchants.

“It was.” Luc said with a sigh. “I'll take care of this.”
“M'lord it's my-”
“It's not your problem. I doubt his father will be happy that his kid is running around and attacking his customers, especially when I tell him you were running an errand for my father.”

“Don't make a big fuss of it, M'lord.” Lissa said. She stood up and brushed herself off.

Luc looked as though he was going to say something, then changed his mind. He shook his head and looked Lissa over. “You're cut,” He said, gesturing with a nod to her knee, “And you're expected to serve dinner for my father and his guest soon. Go get cleaned up. I'll take care of this.”

Lissa bowed gently. She turned and ran towards the house. Away from the cluster of homes nearer to the market, Lord Mintas' house stood away from the rest. The wooden house was once painted bright red, but now it the paint was faded and coming off in flakes, exposing the dull brown wood underneath. She ran to the side, away from the main door, ran to the back, and pulled open the servant's entrance, which was connected to the kitchen. Theresa was there, running about the kitchen frantically like a fly caught in the hands of an inquisitive child. She stirred something in a pot she had hanging just over the fire. Further up was a hog that had been slaughtered for the meal, stuck on a stick and left to stay warm before it was time to eat.

Theresa hung the pot, then turned around and saw Lissa for the first time.

“You!” She cried, pulling a wooden spoon covered in steaming sauce out of the pot to wave at her as she shouted, “Do you have any idea how late you are! I thought I would have to do the serving, and that wouldn't make Lord Mintas very happy, would it!”

“Sorry.” She said, “I was held up.”
“Where's the bread?”

“Luc went to the bakery. He said he would get it.”
“You let Lord Mintas' -son- go and-”

“I think he wanted to have a word with the baker.”

Theresa seemed to calm down a moment, then let her eyes trail over Lissa. “Girl, you're a mess!”

“I know, I know, I-” Before she could protest, Theresa pulled her up to the table. A bucket of icy water was plopped before her. Theresa took a kettle from near the fire, and poured boiling water into the icy water before throwing a rag at Lissa.

“At least make yourself presentable!” She snapped.

“I fell, so I-”

“Look, you've got dirt all over your dress, your dress is all torn and tattered,” She looked over the plain brown sleeveless robe she wore over her white tunic and skirt. “Don't you have anything nicer to wear?”

“Mother might.”

“Well, clean yourself up and go see,” she said, “Lord Mintas needs to impress this lord from Rawlins. If he doesn't he'll likely take off somewhere and leave us all here to starve.”

“Lissa didn't think this was the case. Regardless, she quickly washed the dirt and blood from herself and set the bucket on the floor before going into the servants room just off the kitchen where she, her mother and Theresa slept. Her mother wasn't there of course, she was out in the garden. Lord Mintas had put her in charge of the flower gardens, leaving Lissa to the housework.

It didn't matter. She and her mother didn't have many clothes, and all she needed was another robe. A sleeveless shift to cover her white clothes.

There were no closets in the room, no dressers. The only place to keep something was under the old, unstable beds. She reached under her mother's bed and pulled out a handful of clothes. Another white skirt, a scarf for her mother's head on very warm days, and a brown shift.

'Perfect' She thought. It looked just like hers, and she and her mother were more or less the same size now, though her mother was a little taller. It wouldn't make a different.

She unrolled the shift, and another shift fell from under it. This one seemed new, or at least it hadn't been worn much. It was dark red, the colour of fresh blood, and laced up with black ribbon.

She hesitated a moment, wondering if she should ask her mother, but then decided it likely didn't matter. She needed to look her best, since Lord Mintas wanted to impress his guest. Her mother wouldn't mind if she wore this. She might actually have suggested it. She quickly took off her own brown shift, and tossed it onto the bed before pulling on her mother's red one. She reached around, laced the ribbons tightly around her waist. Even without a mirror she could tell that it didn't have the same blocky appearance as her own shift. It hugged her curves and flowed out around her legs, letting her shirt sway freely under it.

She wondered for a moment if she had tied it wrong. She opened the door back into the kitchen.

“Theresa?”

“Aye?” Theresa looked up and stared at Lissa, stopping her stirring suddenly.

“Is it on right? Does it look ok?”

After a moment, Theresa grunted, and stirred the sauce once more before pouring it into a clay bowl. She took a tray from the table, and lifted the lid. In the time it had taken Lissa to change, Theresa had taken the pig from the spit, and set it on the platter, making it look something like it had lain down to be cooked.

“You look lovely,” She said, “And if the food doesn't help lord Mintas, you will.”

-M.K.Barry

<< Prologue: A Thief in the Night ........................ Chapter 2: Trinkets >>

Saturday, July 24, 2010

A Proper Young Thief: Prologue

A Proper Young Thief

M.K.Barry

Prologue: A Thief in the Night

At the edge of the village there was a small house. In the darkness of the late fall night the house seemed to stand as a beacon of comfort. It's windows were filled with firelight, and the smell of simmering soup drifted in the air, providing comfort to anyone wandering out in the woods so late late at night. The house was easy for the small band of travellers, dressed in tattered and torn black cloaks, to find as they stumbled out of the forest.

“This isn't wise.” A woman said. She was the only woman in the group

“Probably not,“ Said the man leading them, “but will you deny me this?”

“...You know I couldn't. I'm just saying it's dangerous.”

“Anything is dangerous right now,” he said, “Face it, we might get caught soon no matter what we do. We don't have much time.”

Another man nearby gave her a nudge with an ivory hand. He lost the real one to royal guards years ago, “Let him have this, “He said, “We all know he stands to lose more in all this than the rest of us do.”

The woman sighed, pulled her cloak closer around herself, and followed the men to the house. They avoided the glowing windows, and made their way silently to the door. The man in the front pulled down his hood, his short black hair glittered in the moonlight like a raven's wing, his dark brown eyes seemed even darker than normal, the pupils were so large. He stood at the door for a moment, took a deep breath, and threw the door open.

There were two people at the fire. There was a thin woman sitting in a chair, sewing what looked like a small dress. Across from her, sitting on the floor, her legs folded up under her was a small girl with long black hair that glittered in the firelight, She was sewing together scraps of cloth for a small doll. They both looked up, startled from their work as the crowd of people walked in through their front door.

The little girl let out a gasp and jumped up, “Daddy!” she cried. She ran forward and threw herself into the man's arms.

“Hello my little Lissa.” He said. He picked her up and held her before him, hiding a grimace of pain as he did. “Well, you don't look any older,“ He said. “Are you sure it's your birthday?”

The little girl giggled, “No daddy, tomorrow's my birthday!”

“Right! And you're going to be... Three?”

The little girl giggled, “No!”

“Four?”

“I'm going to be seven, and look!” she pointed to her mouth, “I have a loose tooth.”

“Oh wow, another? Didn't you have one last time I saw you?” He smiled and gazed at her, “Seven whole years gone!” He smiled and hugged her tightly. “My, how the years have passed.”

“Maybe they would pass slower if you were here more.” The woman said. The man looked over his daughter's head at his wife. He set Lissa down and looked at the other woman behind him.

“Come here, Lissa.” the woman said, “Say hi to Auntie Ella.”

Lissa giggled and ran over to the woman and started showing her the doll she made.

“I guess your friends are hungry, right Tiller?”

The man was about to say that no, they were fine, but the looks of hunger in his men's eyes were hard to miss. They hadn't eaten since breakfast... Breakfast the day before.

“We're.. a little hungry.” He said. He sniffed the air, “You were expecting us?”

“I had a feeling you might show up.” she said. She walked up to him and kissed him gently before whispering, “You've never missed her birthday.”

After a brief amount of fussing, a small collection of wooden bowls were found, and soup shared out among the men, who dove into the food, stopping only for breath and the odd praise.

“Delicious, as usual. “

“Mara's food is always the best.”

“I”ve eaten all over this kingdom, and out. Best food anywhere.”

Lissa brought her doll over to her father and tried to show him how she had embroidered the crooked green eyes onto it's face all by herself, when her mother started to pull her away from the table.

“You can show him in the morning sweetie. I think it's time for bed now.“

“Just a sec, Mara.”
“You want to spoil her while you're here, Tiller, I know, but-”

“No... No it's not that.” he quickly stuffed a piece of bread into his mouth and turned around in his chair. “Lissa, come here.”

Lissa smiled and pulled away from her mother, running into her father arms. Tiller pulled her up into his lap and smiled at her.

“Now.. You're mother is right, it's very late, and you should be in bed.”

“I know.”

“And you should always listen to your mother, right?”

Lissa sighed and played with the wool hair of her doll, “Yes father.”

“And I know it's hard to sleep. Tomorrow's your birthday, and you're going to be seven. You must be very excited.”

Lissa nodded, smiling as she did.

“So... If you'll go to bed and go right to sleep, I'll give you your present early, ok?”

Lissa gasped and looked up, smiling broadly at her father. Tiller couldn't help but smile, and neither could the rest of his group. It had been so long since any of them had seen a smile like that. A smile without any malice.

“I'll go right to bed and sleep all night!” she said.

“Ok... I'll give this to you now.” He reached into the folds of his cloak which he had hung off the back of his chair, and brought up a strange looking coin with a single red gem in the center. A small, needle-sized hole was in the top, through which a fine chain was strung.

“Tiller!” the woman cried.

“Now Lissa,” Tiller said, holding her still and looking her in the eyes, all jest gone from his face, “If I give this to you as your present, I need you to promise that you'll take very good care of it. I need you to promise that you'll wear it always, and never show anyone. Can you do that?”

The smile dropped from Lissa's face at her father's unnatural seriousness, but she looked up at her father and nodded.

“Good.” He said, “I know you'll take good care of it.” He gave Lissa one more long hug, holding her tightly. Her mother looked on for a moment before interrupting.

“It's time for bed,” She said.

Lissa nodded and gave her father one last squeeze before slipping off his lap and going towards her mother.

There was a sudden knock at the door.

Tiller's men all set their bowls down, and stared at the door. Tiller himself stood up and reached for the hilt of a sword at his side.

The door flew open as someone kicked on it. Five men in armor rushed into the room, swords drawn. Tiller drew his weapon, the others jumped up and drew an array of swords and daggers. Lissa screamed and hid behind her mother who kneeled down and wrapped her arms around her daughter, pulling her into her chest.

One man walked in after the others, his sword undrawn. He was taller than the others, and dressed in black clothes, and wore a dark breastplate. He had a hard, angular face, clean of stubble, and a long, pink scar running across his mouth, cutting it in half “Now now, Shadowthief.” he said, “Surly you don't want violence among womenfolk.”

Tiller held his sword steady before him, “I do what I have to do, General Adams, and you ought to know that.”

“Daddy!” Lissa cried out. She tried to pull herself from her mother's arms, but her mother held her close.”

The guard chuckled, “'Daddy'? That little brat is yours?” he turned to his men, “Lookit that, looks like the great Shadowthief has a family.”

“I swear, any of you lay a finger on them, and-”

“And what? You'll kill us all? We have five men in here, and another ten outside. Really, you were rushing so much you failed miserably to hide your tracks. You think you'll win?” He gestured to Mara and Lissa, “You think they'll manage to escape?”

“They're innocent.”

“Perhaps, but I can't guarantee that a sword won't slip if you try to fight us.”

Tiller and his men stood still, the men looked at the guards. Ella glanced out the window, and nibbled on her lower lip before saying in a hushed voice to Tiller, “Archers and guards. I can see three outside the window. They'll open fire.”

“Come now Shadowthief. Are you going to risk the life of such an adorable young girl, such a lovely wife just to try to escape from us with your little family of thieves?” He paused a moment, then grinning, said, “Or are you going to cooperate.”

Tiller looked to the guards, to Lissa, and started to sheath his sword.

“You'll give me the sword.” the guard said. He looked to the others, “all of you.”

Tiller frowned, but tossed his sword to the ground before the guard's feet. The other bandits followed suit. The guard nodded to his men. Two collected the weapons. Two others took rope and went towards Tiller, grabbed him, pushed him against the wall and started to tie his hands.

Lissa broke free from her mother, flew at the men and bit at the leg of one. He howled and kicked at her knocking her to the floor. A baby tooth fell out of her mouth, and blood dripped to the floor. She pulled herself up, sat on the floor and wailed.

Two guards ran forward, grabbed her, grabbed her mother, and threw them both into the bedroom off the kitchen. Lissa's mother beat at the door, pulled on the handle, but they had propped something up against the door. She ran to the window, but an archer was there, and arrow ready in a tensed bow. She fell to the floor beneath the window, pulled Lissa close to her, and held her daughter in her arms until they heard the men finally leave their house.

- M.K.Barry

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